Here is a recount that I wrote. I have been working on my proofreading.
I have been learning personification and have tried to have it in my own work.sometimes I forget to put in speech marks in my own writing. I hope you enjoy reading my Holiday recount.
Fern I am so proud of how you focused your writing on a few main events and added detail to those events. You have some examples of great language. Well done. When I read this through I do notice a few errors in word tense, can you spot them? Overall well done and keep up the good work.
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