my descriptive writing

Name: Fern 

  CampFire With My Family 

 On the first day of the holidays, my family and I had a campfire as well as a little chit chat. 

 Most of the family came late so we had to start without them, as they arrived we all hid away from them like they went to the wrong spot but they didn't really expect us hiding away from them before they arrived, Then we all yelled. SURPRISE!!!. We all can't believe we scared some of our family that have never been scared before ever since our papa passed.

 Afterward, my family and I went for a hike up the really humongous hill at the back of our property and it was on a dark scary night. BANG!! We all walked up the hill hearing loud bangs, it sounded like people shooting pigs, ducks, and even horses. As we walked up the scary, spooky hill we all wanted to have a race back to the campfire but we all got scared after hearing a loud scary.BANG!!! We all started to get a bit braver than how we were before. we walked up the hill our torches started to flicker and we thought it was still gonna go but then my uncle said.” Hey, my light is flickering what's going on with my torch?”. My aunty screamed like a little child, as she screamed we all got scared and started to hide behind our uncle. “Oh know I thought we were gonna have to walk home in the pitch-black forest”. So we all wanted to have a race back down the hill cause we got more scared just after we were feeling brave. Ok on your mark get set Go!!. Of we went sprinting down the hill as fast as we could and the first one there was me. But I felt sad for the rest of the kids so I let them have the week of jobs with me too. 

 Last but not least as all of my family left me and the kids went down by the eleing hole and went for a swim and it was like midnight and it was really scary cause we were the only ones there. After our swim, we all felt numb like a monster that was covered in ice so we all ran and put our warm cozy Pijays as we went to bed. We felt an enormous chill like we were stuck in a freezer, I looked around wondering what it was that gave me the enormous shiver. Thanks For reading

Weekly Reflection

 This is my weekly reflection I have done for this week/year

Labour Day

 Over the long weekend, we were given the task to read an article about Labour Day and ask and answer our own questions. Here is my work. Enjoy:)

This is our volley ball team. The boys and girls team

 Last week on the 15th of October and the 16th of October. The volleyball team and I went down to Whangarei to compete in a tournament. There was a boys and girls team that went down on different days. So the girls went down on a Thursday the 15th of October and the boys went the next day after us girls. So we won 3 games and we lost one. As for the boys they had the same score as us. But we didn't go down to win we went down to spread the word of our savour who died for our sins.

This was from last term when trinity,atlanta and i wanted to make a game called Guess The Germ.

 Thank u whaea lana for all the teaching you have spent your time with us and teaching us all about what he immune system is and so on.

This Is My Report Writing That Whaea Lana Has Been Helping Me With. Thank you whaea Lana for all of your help.

Here is my report that I have been working on recently, I really want to thank Whaea Lana for taking her time to teach us all about doing compound and complex any many more to come. Also, the thing that is really hard for me is that I get mucked up with the punctuation, and she has been helping us with changing our sentences and making them sound nice and so the reader can be interested in our writing. 

Name Fern, I'd like to see you asking your mum questions about why she opened this gym and maybe some stories of how it is addressing a need in our wonderful community. Opening of the Influence gym 

                         

                                                                      Introduction

 IN 2019 Rhonda Zielinski, who is a Kaikohe resident, opened up a women's only gym for all the women that need a workout without having all the boys around them yelling and all that. They could also have a quiet workout for as long as they want. also, women shy around men so they can work out in peace. 

                                                            Event 1 (when did it start?) 

 Rhonda Zielinski started it last year around June and July. It is really nice to have a women's only gym in kaikohe so that no men will interrupt their workout and so they can have a peaceful work out with no interruption, or so nobody can ruin what they are doing. Would you ever go to the Influence gym? 

                                                           Event 2: (where is it?) 

The Influence Gym, which is located right by the public toilet’s, and near the library. As u head down the road that goes to the little osca u will see the gym on the top of the florist it is a really good view when u go up there cause if you are there early in the morning before the sunrise then it will be the best view you have ever seen.  

                                                   Event 3: ( what is the reason for the opening?) 

Here is another reason. She opened the gym because Rhonda Zielinski lost her Job. For instance, she really needed another Job. So she made her own gym. Also, Rhonda Zielinski can have enough money to feed her kids, or pay the bills, so that Rhonda's Family won't be having to struggle with getting money for food or any other stuff they need for their family.

                                                                (conclusion) 

 So the reason why I chose this is because I wanted to talk about the influence gym so more people can join the influence crew and travel around the world doing marathons like the wall of china, Hawaii, New York City, and a lot more places and if u go You will have a really good time with them cause they always say. No troll left behind, and they will finish with even if they came last or any other place it won't matter what place you come. It's about working as a team and finishing together.

This is mine and crystals long division S.C